Here’s the opening of what I am most recently working on…
Hope it grabs your attention!
I held his heart in my hands. The hot sticky flesh drizzled it’s thick black blood down my arm inking my porcelain skin. I looked past the useless muscle and onto the man that lay on the white tiles, his chest ripped savagely open, his insides torn and exposed.
I knew in that moment, I would have to learn to control my temper.